By: Hamad Albudayri
Yazeed
Air pollution in Saudi Arabia
There is a serious problem in Saudi Arabia which is air pollution
that causes people’s health and the environment presidency of meteorology and
environment made statistics that shows amount of air pollution. The first main couse
is car. According to PME “Vehicles
are the major source of air pollution.” Almost two thirds of carbon monoxide
and 50% of hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxides that pollute the air are attributed
to fuel combustion, also industrial zones and widespread small industries
within the populous mass”. The second cause is factories. According to the
website” the total of air pollution is 78.75” it is very higher than other
country.
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Good quotes and transition words!
ReplyDeleteThings to work on:
1. Explain abbreviations (What is PME?)
2. Be sure your details follow your point. For example, your second point was that factories contribute to air pollution, but your quote/detail is not about factories.
Other than that, you guys did great! I look forward to reading your papers. :-) VM
i mentioned PME on my paragraph which is presidency of meteorology and environment.
DeleteThanks Vickie
Sorry about that! I didn't make the connection.
DeleteUsually when you use an abbreviation, make sure you put it in parentheses the first time next to the name. Also capitalize proper nouns.
e.g. Presidency of Meteorology and Environment (PME)
Good work!
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ReplyDeletenice sentence structure and interesting information, and using nice vocabulary that we learned. -IVY
ReplyDeleteIt's a good instance of air pollution, and statistics are very pertinence. as what Vickie had commended on your resource, it's good to quote those resources to your essay.
ReplyDeletewell organized paragraph and nice vocabulary. In my opinion, air pollution is very common problem in the worldwide especially in these countries.
ReplyDeletenice paragraph also more and new information about the air pollution, and using good vocabulary
ReplyDeleteRaed Aljasir
I think that if Saudi Arabia want to increase the air pollution, they should educate the citizen and show them the problem that they face before the time is over.
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